Would be brilliant with a bit of planing
It was fairly mediocre. Didn't laugh once the whole time. Only noticed a couple of clear attemps at humour. On the up side. I still wanted to watch it. I'm not sure why. Maybe because it's differant to the rest of the stuff you normaly see on here. Did you story board? You shoudl next time. If you plan out you shots better you save animating. The characters looked pretty average but the the animation was good.
Any way that's it. Try again.