Truely Abyss XD
It really sounds like the abyss to me, very quiet and ambient/dancish, i love this kind of songs and good way to start the intro but u gotta work abit more on it. As for the build up, that voice thing should blend in alittle more with the background. The ending is ok.. but you could work on it a little more, this song has great potential, try remastering or remaking this song.
Come check out some of my songs "Flight" and "Mydnite Sun"
and tell me what u think XD. Overall : COOL SONG MAN!!! XD
-Bahdshah