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Reviews for "Metal Acoustic"

Lol

Great job, this totally would make Miyavi proud. Mind if I try playing a metalised version of this and submitting it?

CyriltheWolf responds:

Nah, go ahead. I'd love to see if it sounds good distorted and metalized!

Random = ftw

Um, awesome? :P

Nice :)

Thats a lovely quality mic you have there!
The playing is good and it sounds nice with the acoustics natural "ring"
Check my new one "This is Thursday 2"
Look forward to hearing more soon!
FJ

CyriltheWolf responds:

Nice dude! I'm glad you liked it. :) :) I use a rather low quality mic actually... I wonder what would happen if I got a quality one?

Hmm....

This was very cool, in some ways...

First off, I love the way you drum on your guitar base :D

Excellent quality, flawless recording. really damn crispy and no volume spikes or any noticeable noise.

As far as the composition goes, it was a bit too random for me. You enthralled me with your catchy rhythmic schemes, but your melodical chord structure (atleast in the first portion of the song) leaped around too much for me. Like it was in key and all, but I couldn't get enough feeling as each chord connected because you were going too fast, and there was no distinctive melodies. I like when you hit the harmonics, and the little bit you had going around 0:35, that's a really catchy riff. but when you got to the 200 MPH pace there wasn't a stable base and I couldnt really fully enjoy it. That's just my tastes tho, I respect your skill :) maybe try using just single notes or a two-note chord legato riff to move through more steadly, I don't know. I like the chord progression at 1:26. The section at 2:09 probably definetly could been thrown out, it comes in too suddenly and really doesn't have any place there, IMO. I assume you completely improvised this-maybe have a general skeleton of what you want to play beforehand, if you didnt have one in mind already in this case?

I thought the fingerpicked interlude was a tad weak. But I do like the riff around 3:05, thats the stuff that I personally appreciate more :). Nice chord progression in the end.

Lots of variations and very cool licks in here, overall pretty damn tight. Congratulations on reaching top 5! (sorry if I was being too harsh)

CyriltheWolf responds:

Dude, that was the best review I have ever had. You are the bomb.
Yes, it was completely improvised. I barely had a skeleton. I only knew how I wanted to start it and I improvised, then got to an ending I was satisfied with.
This is actually a take two, the first take began similarly but also had vocals... which sucked. So I tried again. It also came from some emotional distress. I felt better afterward.

Very very nice review man, and no you were not being too harsh at all.

I like guitar solos to

I don't know why you told us you like guitar solos but,whatever,nice playing

CyriltheWolf responds:

*shrug* I made this so randomly, that I just felt like being random.