Not my cup of tea
These serious, long winded fan-flash's with loose plots are not what I call entertaining. But I realise there is a crowd out there who appreciates this sort of thing so I didn't blam it. The animation was ok, especialy for your first flash.
What the?!?!?!
So what the F was up with the dialoge boxes?!!!! One you have to click, which I hate by the way, then others just advance tehmselfs, which is much better to keep the action flowing. Othere than that, the graphics were top notch, and the sounds were really great... but the action was S...L...O...W!!!