song its cool
This was good, i liked it.
Pros)
The words are good
you have a nice voice
flow
Cons)
The music could have used more work
Mishmased ( kinda like the shit i do )
and a little hurtful to the ears if and seem a little stong.
If you have the words of your just going it cool send them! and the part around 2:40 in the song, nice bassline =D i realy like that. ^_^ best of luck on your next song.
Hit me up man if you need help with FL if your using FL. other then that i would love to remix your song.