Butterscotch, yo!
I liked it. The melodies and chords were really groovy. And the voices you used were good.
I see you panned the drums, but they got a bit annoying and unbalanced after a while. Maybe just pan a few things? The right-left thing was a tad annoying. But nice drums though.
I think you should mix it up a bit more. Maybe add a organ solo, cause I could hear that needed a solo. Maybe some other melodies too. Mix this song up with some variation, and it would definately get full marks from me.