Reviews for Second Chance Hitman

[CosmicPenguin]

A flawed, but intresting film

Well, above the technical levels, this certaintly is a worthwhile piece of flash. While your attention to detail seems to be a bit lacking (Little things stand out, like the shell casing flying into the side of the gun, no animation on the steering wheel while the charcter is driving, the bullet wound simply folding upwards when in reverse, etc.) you still manage to create a compelling story, and intrest the viewer. Now, i don't expect this edition to get very high scores simply because you don't show an talent for animation, but that can improve in time (How did you animate it, anyway? It looks like you drew it frame by frame)

I would love to see you put some more work into this series, given improved animation, i could see a future version of this easily being a daily feature

TaKEitOrLUMPiT responds:

Yeah everything woulda been nicer if i coulda changed the fram rate! but i do like to draw very detailed. Thanks!

[Maus]

I applaud...

You do very well with close up work. The music and animation sounds were done to precision (for Flash work) My only suggestion is to let someone else animate other things....like faces in profile.
You've got the knowledge of machinery, but not to draw human profile. Ye cain't draw peeps, yo

TaKEitOrLUMPiT responds:

o well..its just a style i geuss...youll have to accpet it like stick figures i geuss!

[NSUPRA]

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This was good, but if you increased the fps it would of been better.
Great job on this movie.

TaKEitOrLUMPiT responds:

Yeah, but unfortunately this was my first flash i started working on so I was afraid of high framerates.

[crazyguy832]

Great, but not very hitman-like

Okay, this is pretty good. Nice job with it man. However, the way the hit is happening, uh-uh. Not correct. A real hit would NOT be in a public place. A real hitman WOULD use a silencer. A real hitman WOULD NOT use a sub-machine. A real hitman WOULD use a pistol. A real hitman WOULD NOT use a machinegun. A real hitman MAY use a sniper. Anyways, it's a cool movie, but there are some tips if you're gonna go with authenticity for your next one.

TaKEitOrLUMPiT responds:

A real nerd WOULD NOT understand this movie, and that this hitman is special.

[jawsaw]

keep it up

good idea but work on the graphics. and make faster, it's in frickin slow mo. but still good work a impationyly wait for part 2 to come out!!