Was not expecting this
Well i was not expecting this, and i was for sure not expecting the "VOCALS" to come in so soon and strong, but i really love this tune the voclas are great very good quality and you have a sort of build up as you get more into the song, and the words are very fitting with the sound, so really nice job on this some good quality and so-on, As for improving tips, i think you have a solid piece here and dosent need any other additions or changes, nice work regardless.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
so you have a high quality sound here great vocals, top notch and doesnt need any changes.