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^^Good Points^^
I sense that you put a genuine effort into making this movie, and I guess you just aren't the best at making Flash movies. I do appreciate the effort though.
^^Needs Improving^^
There was a lot wrong with this. Like the last episode, the framerate was really slow which made the sprites look really choppy and overall the animations were very slow and delayed. You may also want to consider using spell checker or proofreading the text next time, as there were some usage errors and spelling errors. I found it hard at some times to determine who was saying what, there was no distinction between characters, which didn't help the already strange storyline, which just seems to jump to random events.