It's alright but...
So in this flash, we're thrust into someone's life, who has an apartment in a small town and his life is already pretty much established. It was alright, but I'm tired of demos. Why didn't you just work everything out and then come out with the full thing? Not that I'm saying just because its a demo it sucks. Just that usually the flashes that people put on NG usually end up never being completed so we're left with a demo.
It'd be awesome if there was some reasoning to why this man takes out a loan for $10 then, BLAM wins the $0 lottery??? Man... I wish I could win THAT. But hey, you did a pretty good job... I just hope that the full version comes out and is much better. Maybe even open ended (i.e. Your actions with the other characters will depend on an ending or something.)