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Reviews for "Invisibattle"

Nice

You have extreme potential as an animator. I'm not going to load this review with alot of BS like "SUCKED!! QUIT ANIMATING!! GOD!" ... It's alot more helpful to give constructive criticizm, as the master reviewer of Newgrounds. Now, here is some of the key points of your animation:

-Blood. It was quite realistic, somewhat -too- realistic. Combined with your somewhat "fictional" style of animating, it just doesn't fit.

-Acceleration/Deceleration. Such as bieng tossed into the air and falling back... it was very realistic.. which actually fits a little with your FBS animation.

Now, some of the things to improve on.

-Blood. Make it dangle in the air and fall slowly, a little less realistic.. maybe a lighter shade of red.. and make it fly out farther before dissapearing, maybe let it dissapate slowly.

-Actually being able to see "Invisiman".
The fact that you couldn't even see the animation of the invisible person downgraded my rating to a "3". You might have been able to make his animation a movie clip and set the "Alpha" of it to 30-40..

.... I hope this review helped you somewhat, thanks for reading my opinion. Show your thanks by responding. =รพ...

Jared_Thacker (Watch my suckass stick cartoons!... YAY!)

DaKiller responds:

Thanks man, these kind of reviews really help!

cool

ad a baground and smoother animation, AND cooler blood effects.. and you probably get over 3 at rating.. i giv 3..

lol

That was a good stick flash, nice one

A rare good stick figure flash

I'll never understand how doing an unoriginal martial arts stick figure Flash that is 1 out of every 10 submissions it seems can get someone a 2+ rating almost automatically, but something like this which is far more original than 90% of stick Flash out there is at 1.8 right now. I don't know if this has been done, but I've never seen the invisible thing before, and the blood is actually well animated as opposed to less than half-assed scribbles, its funny, and kept me entertained.

not bad

pretty cool, just wish it was longer, and you should add better graphics