eh...
I've watched a lot of animations on here since I started going to NG way back in 1998... The animation in this movie is really choppy, though it does have merit. Also, the audio looping is off. It doesn't loop. It plays for a while, then breaks, then starts up again. Looping is supposed to run smoothly.
Keep at it! You'll get better, I'm sure. you're off to a better start than most of the people on here.
-- Kitty