Good production, nice directing.
But the question is, does it fits at new grounds?
Sure, this is a place to present works, but NG is also a place about FLASH.
Now, with all due respect, the "little effects", per-sa, you had in there doesn't come short of qualifying as standard movie effects, just because they were made in flash (or were they?) doesn't make the entire movie a flash presentation, you could just as well broadcast it in divX.
And since the rest was pretty much camera filmed, I don't think that NG is the right place for it.
Other than that, I liked it very much.
As an amatuer (I belive?) film, it is quite good.
Like ex-lickmysweaty.com's "immoral kombat", "are 3d games real" and etc. fliks.
I'm rating the graphics according to the effects, since you can't rate real life as "graphics".