I really hope this is a parody
ok... I hate rap but I will try and be fair with this. Lyrics are ridiculous. Kinda funny yeah, but more in a pathetic way than anything else. White boy trying to fake a ghetto accent... Enough said. As for the music, it was good enough to tap a foot to for about half a minute. It's a little more "complex" than crap like crank dat but this still doesn't sound like your 8 second loop took too long to come up with.
If this is a parody and I don't realize it, my bad, but if this is meant to be something serious... Well, see above.