All over the place
The beginning had me going, but the song lost me a bit in, progressing into widely different settings at high pace. I'm all for progressive stuff mind you, but the pace threw me off. Also, with a lot of variation I suppose, comes the risk of transgressing in and out of personal tastes, some passages just didn't speak to me, the electric guitar-sounding bits for instance.
Other than that, I still have to recognize that it's a well put together piece with a lot of work behind it (no doubt), and only that deserves extra points.
I'll give you 7/10