Pretty Okay
This is okay for your first flash animation. I'm working on mines. It's okay, I understand that flash animations take ages. Takes me ages to make a character say, "Oh, you're home."
Reviews for "First Flash"
Interesting
You had quite a lot of nice ideas, but you just weren't able to animate them properly, the best bit was the fire, which actually was pretty high grade in comparison to the rest, naturally you need to practice your movements before your next flash. I'm afraid stickmen made with the line tool don't normally go down well with most people. To hide poorer animation, sound affects are good, that is, if they are done well however.
-Red Wolf
NICE!!! but who sings the intro song??
PLEASE TELL!!!
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OK for your first movie.
No i'm sorry
I respect the fact that you tried but my first ever flash was so much better but at least you tried also make it smoother set frame rate to 24 and draw the characters. make it more realistic ya' know when his head pops offinstead of it slowly going down in a straight line make it spin and make it go faster. Respect 5/10 for good effort
Stetlo