PART 3 NOW PLZ
Hahahaha, that was GREAT! Soooo funny! I can't wait for the next part!
Just oooone teensy comment: I'd have made the "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy" part a bit shorter; it was hilarious when it started and was still funny for the first half minute but then it kinda dragged on a bit long.
Wonderful work!