Wonderfully done
But I need to see this in a full piece, and perhaps speed it up a tiny little bit. It's halfway between chill and frantic, and I'd rather get a little more motion into it. Then again, that's just me. If you want to take it chill, that's on you.
WHAT?!
Where's the rest of the song?
LOLZ
It is good so far...but when you actually "do" write it...I'd advise you to shorten your vamp because if that is the basis of your song, then people will get frutrated very quickly
Good though....
Its pretty good.
Maybe you should start composing 3 minute piano peices for us to hear :D