...eh
eh not the funniest thing ever...in fact...i didnt laugh, smirk, or smile once. the graphics and animation was decent. Could used some more frames for when they were speaking... you got the talent to make something good....now just let someone else come up with the story and jokes.
One HUGE Weakness
Well, this turned out pretty mediocre. Seeing that you not only had yourself and a bunch of equipment, but you also got an entire animation studio and sound studio backing you up, I thought that I was gonna get blown away. I was wrong.
Biancu Studios really pulled off their end. The graphics are pretty much one of the best Flash graphics I've ever seen. It doesn't belong on a place like Newgrounds. It deserves to be the animation for an actual TV show! That is how good, in my opinion, it is. The voice acting is also far above average. The acting itself is superb, but the voices themselves are a little muffled up. The Great Console Wars had far better recording equipment. Apparently, Voices In My Head has good talent. Just not a lot of money.
But why a "5", which is my lowest score I've given by far? Because the most important thing in making a show, whether it be a little 30-second silent cartoon, a full-length $100-million movie, or a Flash animation, like this, is the writing. I feel that it's definitely lacking something. The jokes and gags lost all of their impact due to their poor timing, there was far too much uninteresting dialogue (read a few Calvin & Hobbes Sunday strips involving back-and-forth dialogue and learn), and worst of all, you become a sycophant to people who just want to see nudity. I can see you as a decent drama writer, but practice a bit on comedy first.
Mediocre story, Great graphics
Really dumb plot and dialogue... Good graphics. Good sound.
this suck
i hate everything you do
I agree
I couldn't agree with you more Tool_Of_The_System. I think that this is the most overrated animations on Newgrounds. People just give their five to this because It's full of nudity, that's why. But it is good to see some humanity is left out in the world and views this piece as a perverted one.