TOOOOO LOOOOONNNNGGGGG
You have to work on your timing, because I sat here watching no sound sync up for way too long. Your preloader is a disgrace, but I have to say the plot is decent. You just have to work on your sound, and cut out scenes that go on too long.
dude, come on!
You made me sit through some old joke about Jesus, then I watch a flower pedal bounce around for like, I dont know, a long time...
then there is like this cheesy voice and some corny saying.
I know you can do better man!
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Ok well first of all i loaded your movie in 10 seconds and I was stuck for eternity reading what the fuck Jesus was. Hey Pick up a copy of the holy bible and your ass would notice that he was Jewish. But I will give you an 3 for rating insted of X cause you included a nice Green Day Parody at the biginning. I can see the Fucking. I am sory but you should have gone with no pre loader instead of this shit. score = 0+3+1
Not baaaad...
The drawings weren't great. The sound was pretty shitty especially with the girl's voice at the bus stop... the machine gun and the sounds thereof weren't syncopated, either. You could check your spelling more, in the end credits you spelled a few words incorrectly. Oh yeah... buses don't stop in parking lots (if you want to use the excuse that the bus stop sign was a spray-painted do not enter sign... there was nowhere to enter, either). Maybe it was an intentional poke at ruralites, but it seemed like an inconsistant setting to me; Jenny, too was an inconsistancy, she fell in the mountains and exploded, but was smattered onto the siding of a house later in the movie. You can't be lazy when creating images and backgrouds, and you can't be inconsistant or nonsensical in your settings, it's not going to get you big points at all. Not that I'm against nonsense... as long as it's in the name of silliness or humor and not ignorance or laziness of thought. Best of luck in your future endeavors.
What was the purpose?
The movie probably took this guy a lot of time and effort. The animation was descent, the sound was good, but the storyline totally blew donkey nuts. I'm not sure what the point of bringing a movie like this to the Portal was. I do give him credit for the artwork, and ummm... original storyline, but the effort could have gone into something better.