an old man
this has a really cool opening, sweet piano riffs. it actually sounds more like an old school sound with the antique piano and opening beat. That synth doesn't lay well over the piano melodies tho, not sure if its off key or whatever, but it doesnt gel together with me. the sub bass hits were nice, I would like to hear more of that. The clearer drum beat that you place on the top of the mix at the end is decent, but it doesnt sound too go over the other beat...the reverse effects came to suddenly, and I think you could have made a smoother finish...
alright ideas, but you just need to combine all the instruments so they make a more fitting harmony.