Dude!
Whoa, That kick ass, Lots of ass. It kicked so much ass... ok, I will stop now.... It kicked ass.
Man, How in hell was that shit rejected?! Thats some quality stuff ya got der, I hope to see much more of your work... Mabey a series or somthing? Well, And way. You have grate talent. Use it. Here. Now.
GJ!