Not too bad.
The animation itslef could use some work, but I love the story, it doesnt even really mean anything much, but watching it conjures up feelings inside ya. And very nice choice of music, the fact that I cant understand it only helps the story. Overall: Needs some work, but very good!
hey thanks! The song itself is about extreamly depressed with the metaphor of "We were crushed by a foreign sky" as dumb as that is, it inspired me to make this whole thing with one line.
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I'd have rated style and overall higher, but your stage area is much too large, allows us to see the work area. Except for the distractions of seeing things before we are supposed to be able, it looks good.
I think i finally fixed that, i realized i screwed up, and tried to fix it, but NG wouldnt let me sign in so I had to get a friend to do it. Lost a lot of points there :(