You need to work on
The choppiness,about 14 FPS(Frames per second a.k.a the thing that make your movie faster or slower depending on what number you put into it.)And...hmm you need more backgrounds,Get some from Sprite HQ.Use google(www.google.com) and type in Sprite HQ for the site.Theres your help.ill give you a 4 for your first submission.
Errr..Undead Robot?
Work on the animation dammit!!Get some more sprites dammit!! E-Mail Me if you need any! (CAPCOM41691@aol.com) Pretty neat story though...:D
Eh..
That doesn't look like three days of work to me. I think you should try fixing that up and submit the remake. Slower and clearer is what you need. And everyone hates short movies. :6
alright for your first flash....
i kinda liked it...
O.K.
it was okay for a first movie