close but not quite
The animation was actually quite good. The motion, especially. With a little improvement on the art, it could be something really great. However, at least you're the first to admit, you need a better storyline to work with.
All in all, a good effort!
right.....
i think i giggled like twice ... i think your animated moron is right ... THINK IT OUT ... i think i fell asleep a few times, it sucked that bad!
.....ah I said constructive it's my first flash I thought the animation was good but the plot sucked myself once you make some flash you can critisize others work