wtf
that was just lame, ''wonder how the new teacher looks like''?? geez i dont think it was supposed to be a funny line but oh well, the grammar made me laugh, excellent, if you tidy it up make a story to it and put more work into it, it'd be great sadly, u seem to have gotten bored and submited it before u had finished...
u have to work on your films for a while
keep trying!
and goodluck in the future