Reviews for Sumo Man + French Fry ep0

[smellyboybob]

What the hell was that?

I just didn't think much of it. If this was originally a comic, it was probably better off as the comic in the first freakin place! I didn't think much of it because of the fact, there wasn't much to it! What the hell was it about anyway!? I watched it, stared at it, didn't think much of it, and then as I watched it again, I just realized how much dumber it was getting.

The fact that you put Ep. 0 in it, made me think that you were trying to hard. Maybe if you did something like, freeze frame it with little boxes as if it were a motion comic instead, that would be sweet, sure it would be extra work, but still if you made it like a comic book, with the boxes doing the animation and the words there and all, and then you go from box to box with the animation running, much better, rather than this thing which was a french fry and a sumo man (WHO WASN'T EVEN THAT FAT IN THE FIRST PLACE!!!)

Sumo wrestler's should be fat, the fatter, the better.

I use to be a sumo wrestler, than I became a pirate.

adam-p89 responds:

Exactly, when you see the episodes you'll see why he's skinny. He was fat, but he really sucked at sumo wrestling and all the exercise helped him lose a bit of weight. Fighting baddies all the time got rid of the rest. Good luck pirating, and I'll think about your "comic book style" for the episodes though, I was wondering how to do it, good idea! Thanks.

[jcijohn]

ummmmm

wtf was that...looked like a crappy music video to me

adam-p89 responds:

Shut your little mouth, I'd like to see you make ANYTHING AT ALL!

[fishpenguin]

kill. it's boring.

and that is all. not captivating at all.

adam-p89 responds:

Too bad you felt like that. ((I knew I should have put some fish, penguins and wallabys in it!!))

[i-am-bored-13]

I dont see a future in it

Unless you develop their characters, tell us a bit about them through SPEECH (music in the background isn't always the best option for a flash) and maybe replace some of the characters. Such as french fry. Tell me, looking back, do you think you can come up with many more stories about a french fry and a fat guy? You really have to develop animation a bit more too.
2/5

[Dredg]

hmm

I think your characters are really lame..but you are great at animating and using flash.

adam-p89 responds:

Haha thanks, they are! But Sumo Man is hilarious later on...