Hee hee, he farted an' his doggy dieded... hee hee
At first, I thought the narrator was an actual little kid until I realized it was just an adult (or semi-adult) with a real talent for sounding like a little kid. Whoever did that voice is really good at that shit! Kudos to them.
As for the story, well... it was, indeed, short, but the stupid blubbery voice made up for the lack of deep storytelling. Good job on this!