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Reviews for "Dwarf Invasion ....almost"

Oh, one more thing...

Hey, it's me again, that "munchee" guy who said to pick up the pace... I have two profiles! I'm sneaky.

Anyway, I had just one more recommendation... take the pot-leaf symbol off of the man in the bear suit. If it was not there, I think I would have laughed out loud. As it was, there was just too much going on with the guy in the bear suit for someone to fully absorb him quickly for a good laugh. This is called "economy of means," and what it means is you don't have any extraneous information muddying up your work that may confuse the viewer.

Also, if you have a fight between two people and one of them is sporting some symbol, people will be trying to figure out what you mean by it instead of just enjoying your movie. Plus, he's already smoking a spliff, so it's obvious he's down with the dope.

Just a suggestion from someone who just got an A in his design class. That is to say, me!

THAT WAS A FUNNY SONG

That was a funny song. I will have to steal it off of Kazaa.

One recommendation:
Make the action faster after the scene changes from the stage to the boats. Every fourth beat you should do a jump-cut to a close-up of a different dwarf's face, and then cut back really quick, or something like that. Do that for the nun too. Make the action faster... I mean, this is punk rock, man! Fucking act like it! Nuns and people in teddy bear suits do not fight in slow motion in punk videos! EVERYBODY KNOWS THAT!

If you do this, you will have a kick-ass video. Your artwork is fantastic.

Nice music

Nah im kidding. That music sucks lol but this movie can be good if you decide to finish it..

keep up good work !

yazoo

That sum hot stuff thar. Now FINNISH!! Haha get it?? Finnish, people from Finlad... Common Denominators...

waaaaaaat

how dare you not finish it i want more goddam you i wont be able to sleep now till i see the rest