Not gonna lie. this is amazing.
the music is top fucking notch no lie.
But.. The Vox are horrible. it almost ruins the song.
ALMOST. its still good. scratch that. its great, its just that the singer shouldnt be singing. whoever it is isnt good at it. and the lyrics are cheesy as hell. Not cheesy good cause lyrics can be cheesy good. these are just... bad. the vox detract from the song so much. but amazing work on the music.
maybe get a guy with a better singing voice. revise the lyrics and you'll have something legendary.