dope ass shit
i like it man! big up too u!
pc
bryan
dope ass shit
i like it man! big up too u!
pc
bryan
snore
its not that bad, but its just some mellowdramic movie in which an alien cant get home, ami suddenly supposed to feel bad 4 him, that would be a no, and i doubt it can save evert person from being murdere in an alley way.well let me put it in a way that wont hurt anyones feelings, i could live without a sequal to this
Not bad
This was an interesting story. A few things to work on, though. Firstly, the animation needs to be better. At some points it was easy to see that you were just moving a still picture around, which is no good. Secondly, if you're going to write narration and dialogue, you need to do it better. The text needs to flow off the page, to be easy to read and get the point across directly with good grammar. If it doesn't have those things, it really detracts from the story. Work on these things, and your next one will be that much better.
hmmmm
looks like something goerge lucas would have made 50 years ago
well..
You're right the drawing on this were pretty good so props to ya on that. However the overview of is (storyboard) seemed extremely cheesy and not well thought out. That and the music selection for the fight scene sucked balls! Of course the other songs were taken off the Matrix Reloaded sountrack. nice choice but Matrix music is so recognizable I wouldnt suggest using it.