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Reviews for "Khuskan - Not Enough"

Perfect concept, almost perfect execution

You have my 5 and 9 (since it's a great song, but there's room for perfection).

My nitpicks/suggestions:
- Check the vocal pitch at 1:05 and 1:08. It seems off to me.
- At 3:01, the drums didn't jive to the vocalist (to Tamar). It felt kinda awkward.
- The vocal loudness isn't consistent. It is sometimes soft, and sometimes loud. The difference is about 2dB. If you can't ask Tamar to re-record the vocals, try adding more compression on your vocal track. You may also want to play with the EQ and reverb.
- Lyrics are sad, but suits the melodies of the song. Kudos!
- You have this background noise that resembles playing a vinyl. I'll just think it's your style. It kinda works anyway.

Overall, it's a good track to chill out to. Good job! ^_^

Khuskan responds:

Occasionally people post constructive reviews :D

Yeah. Most of the issues with the vocals are right. Some of the pitches are a little out, and the second verse especially because I accidentally processed it with different auto tune (YEAH I KNOW. DON'T SHOUT) settings than the others without realising. The problem was that since I was making this track for a College course, I had two weeks to learn how to use Cubase with rewire. Fair enough, but I still havn't got around sending audio back to Reason, or even if it's possible to run it through my compression rig.

I might do an NG mix soon where the vocals are put into reason and done in a sort of bypass way to get the best possible effect. Oh, and the vinyly sound effect going in the background was to get me extra points on the course, because such an effect is common place in the trip-hop genre.

lovin it man

that was awesome stuff yo made there
ur on my favourites list

:) 5 votes from me

good

this todally cools my mellow dude. its peacfule

Love it man

Added to my collection. Love the mellow sounds

nice

already on my favourite list ;)