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I know I must really sound like a broken record when I review your stuff, but it's simply because the same thing could really help your pictures become better. The introduction of a background with some detail. Like in this picture it could be something as simple as a desk in the background, door way on the one side, etc...
I do like how you almost set this one up like a comic book strip. Is that something that you have ever thought of before? It might be cool to make some sort of Madness Comic or something.
I also think it would be kind of cool if you tried to introduce some color into these with color pencils. With the ones that you shade it wouldn't be a good idea to add to much color such as the Jesus one that I just reviewed not too long ago, but with this one I think it would be a good idea.
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