This is a lot of effort, but no result
First off, why switch constantly between stick figures and fully-drawn characters? The fully-drawn people look much more voluminous and add a bit of depth to the short. The pace of this was unbearable, and I never really got to the ending. The soundtrack was non-existent and that's what really reeked in this movie. It seems like you've thought some parts out and some parts were completely arbitrary. Good job for trying. 2/5 stars.