good but scattered
It's a good piece (especially the beginning) but it was bit to scattered if you ask me. I mean for the first 2 minutes and 50 seconds there seemed to be a very logical progression of thought and feeling to the piece. It was kind of cheerful and happy then all the sudden got angry. In the end I had a hard time figuring out what I feelings I was getting from the song it felt scattered and lacked direction. Personally I think you could almost split this into three songs and they would be much more meaningful that way (I hope I'm not being rude).