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Reviews for "Life's Lessons 1-5"

Funny!

Dude, this was quite hilarious. I don't know why its funny, I suppose its the stupid mistake kind of thing you're really not supposed to laugh at, but do anyway. I liked it.

Some stuff to consider:
Your stick animation is....ok. The gradient head is nice, because its different. The thing you need to improve is the walking. He's walking like a Protoss Zealot with broken knees, and his hands don't move. It doesn't have to be perfect, just make it a little better.

You probably remember Crow Clock Shorts #03, and how it says that "Excessive cursing" was funny. Its not. It was funny in that particular instance, but all it really does is decrease your maturity value. I'm not saying cursing is bad, but don't make it every other word, especially if its in a clocked voice. Just tone it down a little. Make him seem more like a dumb, senseless, and naïve fool than an immature foul-mouth with no common sense.

Third, this is kind of a stupid thing, but most garbage disposals don't have blades that will sever limbs in them. A lot of people don't know that, but its still a little inaccurate. Its funny, though.

Good job on the laughs, man!

HA!

proof that you dont need animation skills to make something funny as hell, wow! ill admit that #4 wasnt a "special brownie" (that would have gotten you a 9) but everything else was great. 5 was a nice end and 1 was a nice start, what can I say? its a full package, and a guy pisses in an electrical outlet, CLASSIC!! and computer voices just make it all worth while, its like hearing your grampa say "fuck!" a lot. funny stuff man...

You could really of had something, here.

I like the idea a lot. Just change the look of the character. Sticks are boring. Repeat with me, they are boring. I hope to see a new version soon... "Holy shit, this pole looks fucking delicious!"

Ryan

alright i guess

it was ok but u need to work on the humor.....just cause it cusses alot doesnt mean its funny dude

This was just weird to me. Since when does smosh swear? Well, this was a loooong time ago. It wasn't technically them swearing. It was the computer voice thing. It's great to see how far you guys have come.

Everyone's forgotten this. This should be more relevant. You guys normally don't do such dirty stuff. It's weird how a lack of this actually made you more mature. If Internet shows were real?