retard
Life leson #9 some fucked up idiot made a fucked up movie: he got a realy fucked up fucking score.
give it another shot. and this time use your motherfucking head and creativity.
Reviews for "Life's Lessons 1-5"
smosh responds:
When was the last time you tried making a flash movie? You bastard.
haha
pretty funny but they got kinda stupid towards the end, but still funny film. the pole looks delicious part was fuckin hilerious, im still laughing about that right now. and the music was perfect. it added some comical madness to it all. good job. and one last note. sticks suck
You could really of had something, here.
I like the idea a lot. Just change the look of the character. Sticks are boring. Repeat with me, they are boring. I hope to see a new version soon... "Holy shit, this pole looks fucking delicious!"
Ryan
Eh..lame
Dude, I know you had a really good idea, but why stick figures. That is the most unoriginal concept. At least take the time and draw a person, shadow and then it would show you put your time into it. The voices you made artificially also. It would be funnyer if you actually acted those out. When he pees, it just shows his peeing, and it doesnt even get all over the floor, it dissapears. It would be much funnyer if he like tripped or something and got his penis stuck in the electric outlet, this would be much more original and less predictable. Your movie overall wasnt too bad. I didnt really find it funny, but it was amusing for what it was. Try to draw next time.
Funny!
Dude, this was quite hilarious. I don't know why its funny, I suppose its the stupid mistake kind of thing you're really not supposed to laugh at, but do anyway. I liked it.
Some stuff to consider:
Your stick animation is....ok. The gradient head is nice, because its different. The thing you need to improve is the walking. He's walking like a Protoss Zealot with broken knees, and his hands don't move. It doesn't have to be perfect, just make it a little better.
You probably remember Crow Clock Shorts #03, and how it says that "Excessive cursing" was funny. Its not. It was funny in that particular instance, but all it really does is decrease your maturity value. I'm not saying cursing is bad, but don't make it every other word, especially if its in a clocked voice. Just tone it down a little. Make him seem more like a dumb, senseless, and naïve fool than an immature foul-mouth with no common sense.
Third, this is kind of a stupid thing, but most garbage disposals don't have blades that will sever limbs in them. A lot of people don't know that, but its still a little inaccurate. Its funny, though.
Good job on the laughs, man!