Good for a first.
That was actually pretty good for a first. I don't think that there is too much reading really, all you need is to add animation, sound effects, a tad less repeditive (sp?) music and touch up on the "humor" a little bit and it will be fine.
too long
im sorry man but that is far way to much to read
we love you doctor connoly but we dont want u as
our child. i laughed cos it was bad
to much
TO MUCH CLICKING! ! ! ! ! FREEKIN A! THE READING! THEN THE CLICKING! ug..... man. add voices slow the pace if your worried. then just do it man. come on. but the clicking and reading. pissy. nice ploat. but damn.
yeah i know, but i liked it cos its my first.
Try better next time
The movie would be better with moving images and voices and sound. The graphics could also be better.