Ok
First off,I watched the previous versions without sound, and I thought if you added sound it'd be a great animation... I was wrong. You used the same fucking sound for kicking punching and everyhit, whats the deal, if you drop change on the floor do they all make the same noise? And the doors, what the fuck were you thinking, the dooropen.wav for AOL? Come on man, they're metal doors going up, why the fuck would they creak when they open. Im very disapointed to say the least
INCREDIBLE
this was an amazing animation, i commend you! I love the style and mood of it, just get more sound effects and time sounds better...otherwise this is my new favorite peice!
Not bad...
Pretty bad sound effects though. Actually, to tell the truth the sound effects sucked. They were horrible. Go to findsounds.com for some good sfx. I did like the animation though. Nice and smooth. Just add some bg music. Oh yeah, you used fuck too many times. Next time, calm down on the fucks. But other than those, pretty good movie. Oh yeah, and add credits or something. It just looped at the end. That was kinda gay. But yeah, you're just learning. Keep up the good work.
Great Potential
The meager sound effects notwithstanding, your plot development and animation skills are respectable. In fact, I noticed an advancing progression of talent as your movie played. You obviously tweaked the frame-by-frame animation as you developed the story. You have emergent talent, which means you have great potential. Keep it up, and focus on synchronizing appropriate sound effects with the action. Only then will your budding artistry be fully appreciated. I enjoyed watching your animation.
your probely confused
your probely thinking do they want sound or not??
but the thing is is that the music suked and the sound fx was boring not load not hard they just didn't suit the moment