give us more
Throw in some voice acting to spice it up....backgrounds would be nice too.
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Pengy has to stop Ulrig Fishmonger's latest plot to take over the world.
Pretty good...
It was cute, and kinda funny, but PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE learn English or have someone proofread your flash. The choppy dialogue and needless spelling mistakes really took away from the movie.
The-FedEx-Guy responds:
I have had a look at my flash, and have seen "spelling mistakes" but that is the way the people are speaking, i was tryin 2 portray accent. I am English, I live in England, and have spoken and written English all my life. I am new to flash animation, I can't draw, but I have Ideas. I put them up to share not to get put down by people. Thankyou!
p.s. have a look at my new animation: X-Gens
Creative, but Graphics need work
Although the idea behind it is solid this clip seemed to skip around too much and was definitely a bit too short. The graphics as well did not cohere well with each other and greatly detracted from its appeal.
The-FedEx-Guy responds:
Thanx for your review, i'm sorry I didn't get back to you sooner.
I'm new to flash animation, but i have experimented with graphic technique, and I hope my new flash "X-Gens" is more to your liking.
p.s. James Penguin will return in Fishmonger part 2
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