No...

I waited a while for this to load up, and I saw nothing but a real waste of time.

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That was really something quite extraordinary to witness, gosh, well at least you had an actual story for your flash. The animation was really amateurish though and the stick graphics didn't help, however it was funny that the guys head got knocked off and i have to admit i smiled when i heard that extremely high pitched cheer so you did have some good points. Overall that music was very impressive, the flash not as much so.

~H-J~

K

^^Good Points^^
Wow. The music was at least high quality. Though I guess that's why this file was 3 mb and only twenty seconds long.

^^Needs Improving^^
This is beyond improving. If you really wanted to improve this movie, you should basically start over from scratch. The drawings looked like this was the first time you've used Flash, and the sound effects were annoying. To improve this file specifically, compress the music.

THAT was over 3MB!?

Your telling me it took over 3MB to make that? Seriously dude, one word.....Optimization. There's no reason why that couldn't have been done at a filesize less then 200KB. Trust me you'll be doing yourself a favor if you learn how to use flash to better optimize your work. "Flash 5 Cartooning" is a great book to help you to better understand that. Beleive me, it's what I use.