The game is fun, and it's really cool that you made it. Sadly, my biggest issue is the choppy frame rate. I understand that this is intended to be a joke, though I still think it would be better if it were less choppy. Additionally, adding more elements such as potentially voice acting to help create a plot would be helpful. More elements and a narrative story would allow you to create your own unique spin on the parody you're parodying. I would assume it would enhance the gameplay.
Thank you for writing in the description and providing details. I think your description does a good job of giving context to your intentions with your game.
I think this a nice fan-game of reallyhandsomepeople's Supra Mayro Bross. I've noticed that in Supra Mayro Bross has a very fluent frame rate and bouncy controls. It also features moving clouds and background elements. Incorporating jokes would enhance the experience even more. The link to Neocities doesn't function, though the BitView and Newgrounds links do. Overall, I think the game is functional.