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This is a trailer for a series I might make. Please leave reviews of contructive critisism.
update: I got rid of the poem seeing as it sucks
1) The 'poem' sounds like it was written by a 13 year old; 2) it's despair not dispare; 3) The sound REALLY could've been 10 times better; 4) better story line would be nice...
((( NICE GRAPHICS )))
Well nice artwork, it ran abit slow, and the text at the start seemed to go on forever, but i was pleased with the trailer and its movie like text poping up during the trailer, nice chaacter drawing, well cant wait for the full version so let me know, cause it looks good...
MOVIE COMMENTARY: Nice artwork...
I'd love to see this series, it's dark, well drawn, nice animation and, as is standard with you, great fight work. Though I need to say the poem was a little... laughable, not bad but I think it would have been better had it not rhymed.
First of, graphic wise, this is very smooth and a nice appropiate shade of colour. The monsters need more work, they look like killer charcoal briguettes...with teeth!
The audio, get a better track, this skips a lot.
The guy's head could be shrunk a tad, or have more hair in the back.
Just saying this out of curiousity, if a normal gun (I'm assuming it's a normal gun) can kill those beasties, what makes him so different from any other gun with a gun? Like a trained policeman, or sniper, or sharpshooter?
This could be good if you worked on it a bit more, those monsters need some more graphics, little hint use more then one color in blood makes it look allot better,
That shitty gun sound get rid of it and use a more original one, out of a game or something, its so n00b like, and the music is good but bit crackly might wana use something else if you choose to make this, but yeh I think you should make the series maybe just 1 more episode and see how it goes from there, GOod luck
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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