well

more effort is needed, this looks like just a quick movie made for the sake of making a movie, try harder next time put more work into, better graphics, smoother animation, story line, etc.

not bad

you never said you were smart....... and no one said you were stupid.

hey

That was some good stuff from a female. Not many here at NG.

But, o well.

Keeep up the good work! :P

Not bad for a first attempts

Wow the graphics were really good I think for beeing your first attempt at flash. This was okay next time you make one I just think you sould make it a lil longer but keep up the good work

More!

I really liked the essence of this. Just a little longer next time. Keep it up!