Ok attempt

With a bunch of work this could be much better.

Pretty Good

Shoot...that's a lot better than I could do...

lol come on now its good

so yeah you are getting better at flash and....

::sighs::

Just because you put in some great music that was meant to be a tribute to the victims of the Columbine incident, along with what you consider to be humorous violence, does NOT make up a good film. If this is your first film submitted, try practicing techniques before submitting another, as well as practicing making a story to go with it! Come on, this is going to be blammed in a matter of moments...

stank

WOW THAT STANK!! THAT WAS THE DUMBEST THING THAT I HAVE EVER SEEN AND I DIDNT EVEN SEE IT!! IT WOULD HAVE BEEN BETTER IF YOU DIDNT MAKE THE FILM!! OH! THANKS FOR CHANGING MY E-MAIL PASSWORD YOU ASS!!