hmmmm

ok well not bad, the second ep came up so fast, should take some time with each ep so that you get a better outcome, but anyhow it does seem better then the last, maybe make things abit more clear on the graphics, and the buttons seem to only work sometimes, ohwell really love this comic book style though

~X~

The graphics are average, but there is no animation at all. Another issue is that the replay button is broken. If you included animation and fixed the broken replay button, this would improve.

0

The replay button did not work, and it sucked. Make a quality flash, or just do not submit it!

Ryan

Nice try but it’s been done

Some of your techniques are a bit dated, the art is nice in it’s own grungy way (good effort) but unfortunately you didn’t seem to have taken as much time with your story but rather just plopped anything you can on the board. Think about your story more next time THEN work on the images that will accompany it.

Uhmmm...yeah

Dat was pretty odd man, I gotta say... oh well, good effort.... i think.... even though it didnt make a lick of sence.. damn why did i give it a six...
BTW replay button is broken dude, fix it.