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Phantom Reverse #4

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Jun 16, 2017 | 7:55 AM EDT

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Crystal Clocks 5 Points Complete Episode 4.

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EPISODE 1-> http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/693080
EPISODE 2 -> http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/693882
EPISODE 3-> http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/694448

A paranormal curse is killing students every Friday at a high school...and you're next. Survive the week, or die trying.

This is the 4th episode of my 6 episode series called Phantom Reverse. It's about a mysterious curse that has been killing off students at a local high school.

What links the victims? Who, or what, is behind the curse? Find out as you explore this eerie, emotional and action packed anime-inspired visual novel adventure.

Episode 5 will be out in a few weeks.

PLEASE MAKE SURE TO FOLLOW ME TO SEE THE LATEST EPISODES AS SOON AS THEY'RE RELEASED:

Follow me on Newgrounds -> http://jackastral.newgrounds.com/follow
Follow me on twitter - > http://twitter.com/jackastral

Tick tock.

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The choices you make in the first 5 episodes will only tweak dialogue and things like that, though the final episode will feature a major moral choice that'll lead to either the canon ending, or a much darker alternative ending.

Sorry for the wait!

PS. Episode 5 is going to be the best episode so far by a longgggggggggggggggggggggg shot! Lots of twists, reveals and action!

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Patch 1.1:
-Rewrote Julius/MC conversations to give it more emotion, depth and character
-Added two new bits of music to Julius bedroom scene, replacing one of them
-Crystal Clocks book is now added to your inventory
-Added flash back visuals in the beginning to set up the first scene in episode 5
-Tweaked some lines here and there

Patch 1.01-1.02:
-Improved some of the writing
-Fixed "in position" typo
-Fixed "body" typo

Reviews


SraboniSraboni

Rated 5 / 5 stars

When will episode 5 be released?



Riveet099Riveet099

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

The main character isn't exactly easy to connect with so I can be happy when Julius breaks his teeth a bit. The speech choices and the way they are said make him seem like the real dick here. Julius bursts into tears and sputters a bit too quick. The story central plot is okay, but the pacing of the characters is a little strange to me.


JackAstral responds:

I definitely agree with that - I didn't sneak in enough characterization for him yet. Episode 5 starts with a flash back showing how Melonie and him became friends, so hopefully that adds a little bit. The idea is he's suppose to be really guilt ridden and scared because of something that happened in his past (which will be completely revealed in the last episode) - so hopefully I can work out a way to really convey that without slowing down the story too much

I just uploaded a patch now that adds some more emotion and character to this episode. I think it develops Julius and the MC a little more

The character arcs are going to be really clear once the series ends I think, though obviously I'll need to go back and express that earlier on with a couple tweaks here and there. There's strong characters in there somewhere, I just need to boil them down kinda thing


GeminateGeminate

Rated 4 / 5 stars

Good, more item interaction would be nice.



manmusselmanmussel

Rated 4 / 5 stars

this one gave me the chills cant wait for the next



MMewMMew

Rated 5 / 5 stars

Still such a great game! By the way, my old high school has that same history book.