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Honest to god can't remember my original intent for this, there was something else to it but I've forgotten at this point. More to it than this stupid joke that made me pursue it but I don't recall what it was.
Intro theme by Oddboy18: https://twitter.com/oddboy18
Car SFX by Ryan A. Boone: https://twitter.com/BooneBum
The animation was absolutely fantastic-however the comedy wasn't quite there (for me at least)
The punchline was pretty obvious from the beginning and I think that took away any potential it really had for "shock humor."
I think perhaps the joke would have stuck better if it focused more on the "oh god..I'm dead" aspect. Yet again I'm not entirely sure if that dark or humor was really what you were going for.
Regardless-it was very well made so I gave it 4 stars! Only thing I could critique was the comedic timing seeming off..but I could understand how shorter could be better with animation-especially if it's a one off joke.
But I digress-looking forward to more from you in the future!
I think i remember a show named casper that was about a child ghost, its really similar to that show; incredibly similar.
I'm so dark for liking this, it was hilarious! xP
Dat was sum gewd anti-humor.
Your animation is smooth asf, it all flowed beautifully, keep it up!
A starving village ask a water spirit to help them.
Strawberry clock forgets his ticket on the train but maybe he'll be ok
a clock day story
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