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Hope is leaving another island when he meets up with this strange man.
iMovie SoundEffects/ iLife SoundEffects
Good sound quality. Nice voice acting. Good use of ambiance and sound fx. Interesting camera angle at 42 sec and appropriate since it's from the character's pov. Story went a little too fast though. I couldn't figure out why the character in the overalls flipped his attitude so quickly and decided to join the protagonist at the end with no explanation.
Artwork could obviously improve but I get that animating is tricky. If you have have the capability try playing around with different brushes to add some texture - especially with the background and you'll see a huge difference. Also you could use different mouth shapes for phonetic sounds: I find this diagram to be extremely helpful and simple http://orig06.deviantart.net/a793/f/2009/079/f/7/phoneme_mouth_chart_by_cartoonistwill.png
Additionally if you add eyebrows to your characters it will make it far easier to articulate their expressions.
Blue Pencilmate meets Red Pencilmate, but things don't go so well...
While taking the day off work, Lloyd and Glynis take in a movie
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