Entertaining

Well I will say this was pretty entertaining the humor is pretty good as for a form of improvement maybe more random stuff too but it was pretty entertaining nice and funny that's what I like to see anyways keep making more of these amusing films and such

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
More random jokes and such

~X~

lmao. XD So random! And thus, it was funny. Suitable surprise with the response too, what with the expression hinting at some other response entirely (and the pun being based upon the heat). Twisted nicely. Not sure about the panning-around-thing at the end, but apart from that, perfect execution.

-cd-